Okay, my comic's ready for publishing!

After a long time, I've developed my comic at a point where I can start showing it off. I have had problems figure what kind of style my comic should be drawn in and all sorts of things.

As you may know, the name of the comic is Krek. A Norwegian word for Creep.
The comic will be written in Norwegian, since I am trying to hit the Norwegian comic lovers. The future goal is to be able to put my comic in local newspaper.
So, to be able to do that, I really need the help from you guys. I am no pro at making comics, so some help on the way would be really appreciated.

Here at DeviantArt, most of you are speaking English. I have to figure out how I can make you understand the comic. Should I make two version of the comic – one in English and one in Norwegian – or should I just make one in Norwegian and have the translation in the info-box?

Anyway, I will upload the comic as soon as possible.
And I shall write some information about what is going on in the comic, so you can hang on and understand what kind of creatures these peoples are.